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My wedding invitation wording....Nice or Cheezy??

Sine we are having our wedding on the 4th of July, I am trying to make it festive, without being cheezy.
My colors are pink white and silver, instead of the red, white, and blue....
So, here is the wording I came up with for our invites- what do you think?
The invitation is in card form...so it opens.
On the left side it will say:

Crystal ----
and
Jeremy ----
July 4, 2009

~~~~~~~~

An answered prayer he is to me;
My greatest blessing she’ll always
be.
And so this day we’ll pledge our
love
in front of friends, family, and God above.

Then on the right, it will say.....

Please celebrate with us the explosion
of new life and witness how
our love sparkles for one another
as we begin our future together
with a bang!

Crystal ----
and
Jeremy ----

Saturday, the fourth of July 2009
at four thirty in the afternoon

------- ------ Church
---------Street
------------ Iowa

Reception to follow at the
--------------
Main Street----------- Iowa
6:00 P.M.


So ~ cheezy?