tracydurmon's Blue wedding

Ok so we were talking about our invitations and wanted something not to formal since we are having a laid back wedding. I came up with these for the wording. Tell me what you think of it:

To all our wild and crazy family and of course our rowdy friends,
Our wish is that you'll join us as our single lives come to an end,
Since the day that we met our lives have been enriched,
So finally we decided its time for us to get hitched,
The celebration will be fun and very casual too,
So wear your shorts and flip flops and bring your swimsuits,
We can't wait, for our two lives to become one,
So please fill out the enclosed card and say that you will come.


and here is the other version

To all our wonderful family and of course our dearest friends,
Our hopes are that you'll join us as our single lives come to an end,
The occasion is purely joyous and very casual too,
So won't you please come join us as we say I do,
We made an invitation list, we did it with much care, So please respond and tell us that you will be able to be here,
First we'll say our wedding vows followed by I do's.
And then we'd like you to join us for the reception too,
Were going to have some Bar B Q and some yummy sides,
Please tell us you will come and celebrate with us the groom and bride.