Mar 9, 2010


Ok, we're getting hitched May 16th but our formal reception is September 17th. Which wording do you all like?

ONE

Maureen and John Lopez
are happy to announce
their marriage
that took place in a private ceremony
on Thursday, October 11th, 2014
San Juan, Puerto Rico

Please join them for a
reception to celebrate their union
Saturday, December 6th, 2014
7 o’clock in the evening
The Johnson Park Mansion
891 Millard Drive
Sheriffs, Ohio


TWO
On Saturday, June 21, 2014
We slipped a ring on each
other's finger
And made a promise for life...
Join us as we celebrate
now that we're husband and
wife!

You are invited to attend an
Adult Reception to honor the
newly married
Kim and Michael Biggs

At the home of Tim Clark
2245 South 22nd Street
Philadelphia, PA
on Saturday, September 6, 2014
from 4:00 p.m. - 10:00 p.m.


THREE
He slipped the ring on her finger
a promise made for life . . .
Join us as we share their joy
now that they're man and wife!
A party to honor the newly married
COUPLE
will be held on DAY
at TIME
ADDRESS


Please vote 1, 2 or 3
This will be a formal adult only affair..so I will add that to the wording as well.
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me
Red deer, AB, Canada
03/09/2010
1
shnoukys's Red wedding
Montréal-nord, QC, Canada
03/09/2010
3
nidhal's Purple wedding
Chino, CA, USA
03/09/2010
I really like #2: it's lighthearted, positive and sounds like fun! I think 1 is too formal and sort of has that "you weren't invited to the private ceremony" vibe which I'm sure isn't the case but it's just how it reads. And #3 is cute too but doesn't flow in the rhyme as well...
blkbutterfly's Pink wedding
Killeen, TX, USA
03/09/2010
I like 2! It just stands out more.
ccranetobe's Orange wedding
Melbourne, Andorra la vella, Australia
03/10/2010
No 1 because you just typed the word formal affair. it was informal I would say 2!
foreverstartsnow's Black wedding
Barrie, ON, Canada
03/10/2010
2
tashasita's Purple wedding
Nepean, ON, Canada
03/10/2010
Def #2 for me! It's fun like you are! :) Love the poem, too cute!
hecallsmehisdarlin's Black wedding
Portsmouth, VA, USA
03/10/2010
Hmmm...I'm torn on this one.  The first one was my pick, especially once you said the reception is going to be formal, but I do agree with Nidhal that it does read like "you weren't invited".  Out of the other options, my next pick would be the second one.
spirtle's Chocolate wedding
Duluth, GA, USA
03/10/2010
I like 2 as well.
unpredictablebride's Black wedding
Harvey, IL, USA
03/10/2010
Ohhh I dont like the "you wernt invited" vibe..thats bad!!
Maybe on wording #2 I can replace this

You are invited to attend an
Adult Reception to honor the

With this:
You are invited to attend an
Formal Adult Reception to honor the ....
monikas's Chocolate wedding
Orlando, FL, USA
03/10/2010
My vote is 2
ccfortune10's Pink wedding
Gladstone, OR, USA
03/10/2010
#2 all the way!
light1882's Orange wedding
Mission, KS, USA
03/10/2010
#2
amandasoontobemoury's Pink wedding
Tacoma, WA, USA
03/10/2010
2! :) Love it!
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Jamysgirl
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
03/10/2010
#1 is more formal but I would take out the words "in a private ceremony" .

#2 is cute and lighthearted. I also that that is says "WE slipped a ring... " as opposed to #3 "HE slipped....
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dewsbury
Sevenoaks, Kent, United kingdom
03/12/2010
I Love 2. Its really sweet.
wilsom04's Pink wedding
Philadelphia, PA, USA
03/13/2010
#1 for me.

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